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Cross Country

Huffing and Puffing across the finish line I am not sure who won,I mean who came 3rd  it was a tie or a something.

As I was running I saw my   jogging  and I just past him me and my friends were jogging or sprinting together we I  was going fine then I got a very bad stitch and then I slowed down and me and lomio lee past me and his dad was cheering him on and he was the eyes at the back of his head.

When I caught up his dad told him i was right behind him, as we were running to the park he was still in the lead but at the last 10 centimeters I sprinted and thats where it ends.

Here is the people that were involved the people that I talked about not the whole cross country.http://pesjoshuat.blogspot.co.nz/

http://pesstevensone.blogspot.co.nz/

http://pesseant.blogspot.co.nz/

My Retell Of The Hare And The Tortoise.

Once upon a time on a lovely farm there was a hare and a tortoise.The hare is fast and selfish on the other hand the tortoise is polite and slow and what you will learn from this story is that slow and steady always wins the race.

On the farm the hare was being very rude to the turtle (tortoise) but the turtle probably wasn’t listening that’s when a fox popped out of the hedge row and he said the turtle’s hibernates hiber what's.The turtle sleeps for a whole winter what a whole winter he must be the laziest animal alive it would be hard to know if he is even dead. The turtle can live up to 100 years old,the fox made a deal with the hare and the turtle to have a race if the they won the badger and the rat and the hare would have to work for the fox and the turtle for a whole month.

It was the moment for the race they were both lined up at the line ready to race Ready Steady GO as he said the hare was just standing there waiting for the turtle to move off the line but he got bored and sprinted off. While he was running he was saying this is still to himself it is a long way to go just then he felt less springy and was tired,finally he got to the mountain,well six fields is a lot and hard to do, up on the mountain the hare could see  the turtle only past the 1st field. The hare was tired and decided to have a little nap but during his nap the turtle sneaked past him and was gone in the distance when the hare woke up the sun was going down and it was dark. On the way back he thought that the turtle had given up and went home, as he was getting closer he saw the rat and the badger, and said what’s my prize your prize is that we are working for the fox for a month.

The moral of the story is,the hare think’s he’s the best but then he had been beaten by a 100 year old slow coach haha.

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