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Showing posts with label December. Show all posts
Showing posts with label December. Show all posts

Thursday, 10 December 2015

This Year's Reflection

I felt like my first year in intermediate was  amazing, i definitely enjoyed my first year ever in intermediate. 2015, So far i’m enjoying the life of a senior, there are many good things about being a senior.

One thing I found very satisfying this year was all the trips we went on and how many activities we did. We did activities like friday sports, and trips like Rainbows end and Polyfest and soon Parakai.
The difficult parts in this year we're moving to more work and more difficult work. I also found work extra hard from Extension, Maths and Reading & Writing. I feel like this year I maybe could’ve done more work then I have done.
I’ve enjoyed the new teachers and the ways they teach and the way they talk to us.I think that the teachers are doing good for teaching us a lot of new things.

This year has been super fun, busy, challenging and cool. I want to be able to look forward to next year as I will be a year 8.

Overall I had a really fun year, did new things and accomplished new achievements. 2015 Was an amazing year in my opinion, and I thank all the teachers for teaching me.

Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Poem


This is my tyrannosaurs poem, me and my friends worked to make it.

Monday, 29 December 2014

Merry Christmas

I am happy to say Merry Christmas to all and Happy Holidays I am sorry that I said it so long but I went to Portland to see my Nana's new house and I will write a post about that aswell. I will also have a family reunion on January the 2nd so I will be away for a while for that, and then I am going to totara north. So I am really busy and I probably won't post for about 2-4 weeks. So I would like to say Happy New Year Everybody! and hope you all have a great time.

Sunday, 21 December 2014

Holidays


Yay it's the holidays and it is also Christmas in 4 days I am just saying Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and Happy New Year. 

Saturday, 28 December 2013

Tuesday, 17 December 2013

The Last Days Of School.........

The last days of school will be carrying,packing, and shifting I don't know what we are going to do. I wish we will get lockers and desks.

I would like to be doing all of this carrying but we get work and free  time I can't wait till my next class. I would like to watch our class get destroyed. I wonder what class I will be in next year.







Monday, 2 December 2013

Spider Monkey

Title:  (Spider Monkey Who Kills People)

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Once upon a time in Australia there was a spider monkey that killed almost every human being. But one man had been travelling across the entire earth fighting those horrible animals and his name was Spartacus.



Spartacus was very strong and brave. When he finished killing all the beasts in U.S.A he got a call from Aussie It was Hugh Jackman he said there is a beast ruling our town and Spartacus said ok and and he went on his plane and headed for Australia and that spider monkey was still searching the houses and the building and he was really hungry Spartacus showed up.





Everyone was happy he came I mean Hugh Jackman he was waiting to see what the beast was thinking it was hard but when he figured out what he was thinking nothing. So he waited walking in circle and then the monkey thought attack and the started punching each other and then they brang out there guns Spartacus started shooting the beast ran away but came back trapping Spartacus got trapped with a spider web and ripped out straight away.




The battle went on for hours there were big hits small hits and then death Spartacus won with a broken arm and heel. They all came out of there hiding spots and cheered for him and then the world got better and the world was happy.


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