Spider Monkey

Title:  (Spider Monkey Who Kills People)

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Once upon a time in Australia there was a spider monkey that killed almost every human being. But one man had been travelling across the entire earth fighting those horrible animals and his name was Spartacus.

Spartacus was very strong and brave. When he finished killing all the beasts in U.S.A he got a call from Aussie It was Hugh Jackman he said there is a beast ruling our town and Spartacus said ok and and he went on his plane and headed for Australia and that spider monkey was still searching the houses and the building and he was really hungry Spartacus showed up.

Everyone was happy he came I mean Hugh Jackman he was waiting to see what the beast was thinking it was hard but when he figured out what he was thinking nothing. So he waited walking in circle and then the monkey thought attack and the started punching each other and then they brang out there guns Spartacus started shooting the beast ran away but came back trapping Spartacus got trapped with a spider web and ripped out straight away.

The battle went on for hours there were big hits small hits and then death Spartacus won with a broken arm and heel. They all came out of there hiding spots and cheered for him and then the world got better and the world was happy.

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She's Sinking

1.Complete the table of information.

Name of ship.	Taitanic.
Name of shipping company.	White Star.
length of ship.	294 Meters
Date of maiden voyage.	10th Of April 1992
Captain's name.	Edward J. Smith

2.Where was the titanic sailing to on its maiden voyage.   New York

3.Approximately how many people were on board the titanic when it left Southampton. 1500

4.Why do you think the titanic hit the iceberg.

It was a dark night and it was hard to see.

5.Why did so many people die.

There weren't enough lifeboats.

6.What is the signal of SOS.

Save Our Sole.

7.The titanic is referred to as a ship and also a liner in the passage.words similar in meaning are called synonyms. Can you find another word it the passage similar in meaning to ship ? Vessle

8.find words in the passage that mean:

a.cut: rip

b.died: killed

c.first: won

d.cold: shivering

e.crisis: disaster

f.saved: rescue

Kawau Island

The camp is in North cove of kawau island.

There are fishing,raft making,and Orientating.

I cant wait till next year so we can go.

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Maths DLO

These are my weekly Questions.

Edited Verison Of Snakes On A Plane

Once upon a time there was a Plane at the airport. And they were going to leave at 12.00 at that time it was 11.50. So they had 10 minutes till take off so they all sat in there seat and waited till take off and a man put his bag at the top of a person and then walked out the plane took off the bag inside but not the man. The plane was in the sky when the under the bag heard the hiss and decided to check it out. The man opened the slot and out came pythons and snakes.

Zane,collin and jordan bring out there sword’s and  Jordan grabbed a gun and started shooting them. Zane and collin were slicing head’s and body’s but there were too many so Zane,Collin and Jordan grabbed a parachute and jumped off and Jordan landed in a pool Collin landed on a trampoline and Zane I landed on a roof we all ran and the people on that plane did not survive.

That man was not found but that plane wasn’t either so this always lead up to a problem and  this man could strike again


Sorry it is not edited

Our Rhyming

Zane Louis and Wiremu from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

My New Punctuation Goals

Weekends With My Cousins

Pretty much every weekend I go to my aunt's  who lives in mt albert, that was my old house.

One time I went there and me and my cousin played call of duty black ops 2 for nine hours.I do enjoy playing xbox 360 kinect. This weekend  I walked from richardson road to st lukes with my uncle we were grabbing a ball and a feed and my sister was coming back from waitangi with the school. My cousin Tahupotiki is a two year old and a his brother is a eight year old. I would enjoy having a baby brother. He is cute !!!!!!!!!

I hope i'm going to my cousins and I hope I go this week.

Cross Country

Huffing and Puffing across the finish line I am not sure who won,I mean who came 3rd  it was a tie or a something.

As I was running I saw my   jogging  and I just past him me and my friends were jogging or sprinting together we I  was going fine then I got a very bad stitch and then I slowed down and me and lomio lee past me and his dad was cheering him on and he was the eyes at the back of his head.

When I caught up his dad told him i was right behind him, as we were running to the park he was still in the lead but at the last 10 centimeters I sprinted and thats where it ends.

Here is the people that were involved the people that I talked about not the whole cross country.http://pesjoshuat.blogspot.co.nz/

http://pesstevensone.blogspot.co.nz/

http://pesseant.blogspot.co.nz/

Our Reading In The Morning

Zane Reading Interview from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Aesop fable

Your Challenge: To explain how a morale from a fable applies to your life

You will need to think about:

• What fable you will choose and why
• How many and what characters will be in your story
• Your use of speech and the correct punctuation
• A Problem and solution
• Your attention to detail

Plan:

Paragraph 1: Retell and summarise an Aesop Fable of your choice

Paragraph 2: Explain the morale of the fable.

Paragraph 3: How does the morale apply to your life? What have you learnt?

Title: Goldilocks  and the three bears

Start Writing Here

Paragraph 1

Once upon a time in the woods there were three bears that lived in an old cottage Farter bear mummy bear  and baby bear.

The bear family went out for a walk and this little girl ran away from her mother her name was Goldilocks. She was running when she came  past the cottage and he decided to go in.

When she got in she saw no one was there but she saw bowls  of porridge and she hopped on the biggest seat  and tried the porridge it was too hot and the chair was very big she went to the other chair it was  a little bit smaller but the porridge was still the same so she went to the last chair and tried it and it was perfect she tried the porridge that was perfect as well she finished it all up when she finished it she felt tired.

She looked around to see anything but she saw stairs and decided to walk up She saw three beds and she didn't know which one to sleep on she tried all of them but the first two were too big and uncomfortable but the last was purrrrfect she went straight to sleep.

The bears came home very hungry looking for there porridge the papa bear said “someone has eaten all my porridge” mama bear said “someone has eaten mine” And baby bear said “someone has eaten all of mine” they heard loud snoring from the bedroom when they saw someone was in baby bear's bed they woke her up and scared her away they never saw goldilocks again.

Paragraph 2

The moral of the story is mind your own business and don’t use other peoples stuff without asking.

Paragraph 3

Don't use other peoples stuff without asking.And don't go into other peoples houses.

listen to ‘Zane's goldilocks and the three bear's’ on Audioboo

Atoms

1.What are Atoms?

 A.Tiny particles  that make up all matter.

B.Tiny particles that can only been seen with a microscope.

C.Tiny particles that look like gnats

D.Particles that are so large they cannot be seen

2. What does the word Atomos mean in ancient greece

Its something that cannot be divided anymore.

3.

4. What is quantum mechanics

The study of atoms and tiny particles.

5.If you wanted to find the chemical element of an atom ,you would need to

A.Know how many electrons it has.

B.know how many protons it has .

C.Know its melting temperature.

D.See it with a microscope.

6.

Part 2                                                          

Across

1. Positively charged parts of an atom

nucleus

6. Negatively charged parts of an atom

electron’s

7.Atoms are building blocks for …....

molecules

molecules

8.The number of electrons in atoms are determine  an element's _chemcail_ properties

9.Neutrally charged parts of an atom

neutrons

10. A chart which lists all of the known elements

Periodic table

Down

2.protons and neutrons are found in this part of an atom.

nucleus

3.type of force that holds the nucleus of an atom together.

Electro magnet.

4.area of science that studies tiny particles like atoms

quantum mechanics.

5.The word atom comes from this language.

Greece

My Retell Of The Hare And The Tortoise.

Once upon a time on a lovely farm there was a hare and a tortoise.The hare is fast and selfish on the other hand the tortoise is polite and slow and what you will learn from this story is that slow and steady always wins the race.

On the farm the hare was being very rude to the turtle (tortoise) but the turtle probably wasn’t listening that’s when a fox popped out of the hedge row and he said the turtle’s hibernates hiber what's.The turtle sleeps for a whole winter what a whole winter he must be the laziest animal alive it would be hard to know if he is even dead. The turtle can live up to 100 years old,the fox made a deal with the hare and the turtle to have a race if the they won the badger and the rat and the hare would have to work for the fox and the turtle for a whole month.

It was the moment for the race they were both lined up at the line ready to race Ready Steady GO as he said the hare was just standing there waiting for the turtle to move off the line but he got bored and sprinted off. While he was running he was saying this is still to himself it is a long way to go just then he felt less springy and was tired,finally he got to the mountain,well six fields is a lot and hard to do, up on the mountain the hare could see  the turtle only past the 1st field. The hare was tired and decided to have a little nap but during his nap the turtle sneaked past him and was gone in the distance when the hare woke up the sun was going down and it was dark. On the way back he thought that the turtle had given up and went home, as he was getting closer he saw the rat and the badger, and said what’s my prize your prize is that we are working for the fox for a month.

The moral of the story is,the hare think’s he’s the best but then he had been beaten by a 100 year old slow coach haha.

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Zane's Movie About Antarctica

Here is my movie about Antarctica.

Matariki story

Matariki has got a cluster of stars. But you can only see seven stars with the naked eye. You can see the rest if you have a telescope.You will be able to see them all over the world.

Matariki was used by the farmers. The farmers checked if it was going to be a good winter. If it was bright it would be a good day,if they weren't it would be a bad cloudy winter.

You would only be allowed to see them nine months of the year
. And they will disappear for three month's . It means Maori new year. The stars are the seven sisters.