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Thursday 13 June 2013

Unusual Day

Once upon a time there was a mechanic named jeff he is having a very unusual morning. So the mechanic walked to work  and he needed to clean because that place looked like a dump after work jeff walked home and that night was the night  that jeff found a strange package at his door so he walked in and sat down to open his mail.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Zane,

    How have you been well I have been great how did you feel about the scrambler when they said that you had to write a very unnatural story about this writing you have contibute keep up the great work Zane you ROCK.

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  2. Hi Zane, that is an interesting story that you have made from your clues. I think you need to practise using commas and full stops. I can't wait to read your next story.

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