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Saturday, 28 December 2013

Tuesday, 17 December 2013

The Last Days Of School.........

The last days of school will be carrying,packing, and shifting I don't know what we are going to do. I wish we will get lockers and desks.

I would like to be doing all of this carrying but we get work and free  time I can't wait till my next class. I would like to watch our class get destroyed. I wonder what class I will be in next year.







Wednesday, 11 December 2013

Why I Want To Be An Ambassador

Hi Mrs Burt my name is Zane, Kaycee's brother and this is my story of why I want to be an ambassador.

I would like to be an ambassador because I like showing the world the stuff I do on my blog. The reason why i want to be an ambassador to represent Pt England School and make my family happy and I feel confident that I can do it. I would love to be an ambassador like my sister was.


It would be great to get a spot with the other ambassadors and I love presenting and talking. The job would be good for me because I talk loud and sometimes quiet but I can speak loud when you want me to. Please give me the opportunity to be an ambassador I will try my hardest.




Learn create share is my way of blogging like these math problems or other work problem's.

This is why i'd like to be an ambassador.

Wednesday, 4 December 2013

Monday, 2 December 2013

Spider Monkey

Title:  (Spider Monkey Who Kills People)

Topic:

Purpose: To report and inform on a topic.

Audience: Readers of my blog, students and teachers at PES.

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Once upon a time in Australia there was a spider monkey that killed almost every human being. But one man had been travelling across the entire earth fighting those horrible animals and his name was Spartacus.



Spartacus was very strong and brave. When he finished killing all the beasts in U.S.A he got a call from Aussie It was Hugh Jackman he said there is a beast ruling our town and Spartacus said ok and and he went on his plane and headed for Australia and that spider monkey was still searching the houses and the building and he was really hungry Spartacus showed up.





Everyone was happy he came I mean Hugh Jackman he was waiting to see what the beast was thinking it was hard but when he figured out what he was thinking nothing. So he waited walking in circle and then the monkey thought attack and the started punching each other and then they brang out there guns Spartacus started shooting the beast ran away but came back trapping Spartacus got trapped with a spider web and ripped out straight away.




The battle went on for hours there were big hits small hits and then death Spartacus won with a broken arm and heel. They all came out of there hiding spots and cheered for him and then the world got better and the world was happy.


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Friday, 29 November 2013

Monday, 25 November 2013

She's Sinking

1.Complete the table of information.



Name of ship.
Taitanic.
Name of shipping company.
White Star.
length of ship.
294 Meters
Date of maiden voyage.
10th Of April 1992
Captain's name.
Edward J. Smith




2.Where was the titanic sailing to on its maiden voyage.   New York



3.Approximately how many people were on board the titanic when it left Southampton. 1500


4.Why do you think the titanic hit the iceberg.
It was a dark night and it was hard to see.



5.Why did so many people die.
There weren't enough lifeboats.




6.What is the signal of SOS.
Save Our Sole.


7.The titanic is referred to as a ship and also a liner in the passage.words similar in meaning are called synonyms. Can you find another word it the passage similar in meaning to ship ? Vessle




8.find words in the passage that mean:


a.cut: rip


b.died: killed


c.first: won


d.cold: shivering


e.crisis: disaster


f.saved: rescue



Wednesday, 13 November 2013

Kawau Island



The camp is in North cove of kawau island.
There are fishing,raft making,and Orientating.
I cant wait till next year so we can go.


Monday, 11 November 2013

Athletics

On Friday it was the Athletics day and people wore there house colours. There were high jump,discus,shot put,long jump,Javelin, and sprints but i didn't come a place in any of them. I am not good at discus but i am at sprints and i really enjoyed it it was going alright until the rain came. My house colour was takitimu and takitimu is yellow. Every year group had there teacher and we had Mrs Garden. Mr Barks was doing javelin and that's all i can remember.




I really enjoyed the day but when i landed on the high jump pole it didn't really hurt but it was pretty fun and my best one was sprints. There were some successful and not so successful but there were the lucky.

Monday, 4 November 2013

Term 4 Test

One day out in the country these boy’s named Joe,Franklin and Michael were people that like running into other peoples properties.



So one of the days they were playing around somebody’s farm they run past there all the time. But this time when they were running past it they heard something and then they stopped and looked at the farm and no one was there.




Joe walked closer and heard it again but it said ‘Joe’ and he ran back to the others and said it’s haunted with like a ghost or someones playing with us Michael said ‘there is no such thing as a ghost.’

So michael walked to the farm and he said ‘hello’ and the voice whispered ‘Michael’ and Michael said show your self and then a huge shadow went on the wall and michael shouted don't show yourself and he ran back to the other’s Michaels like its a ghost.




And Franklin walked up to the farm and said ‘show your self’ and the shadow came up on the wall again. Franklin wasn't as scared as the others because he was the one who set it up and the ghost was Franklins uncle and Joe and Michael were really angry at Franklin. But when they were leaving they heard it again and Franklin said Um guys you might want to turn around they were like not falling for and then they turned around to see were Michael was and he was running behind them and they saw someting they all ended up running home but now they think it is haunted but it was the farmer who had a white sheet over his tractor.




Every time That they ennoie Franklin hell bring up how they thought there was a ghost.   

The End I think

Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Edited Verison Of Snakes On A Plane

Once upon a time there was a Plane at the airport. And they were going to leave at 12.00 at that time it was 11.50. So they had 10 minutes till take off so they all sat in there seat and waited till take off and a man put his bag at the top of a person and then walked out the plane took off the bag inside but not the man. The plane was in the sky when the under the bag heard the hiss and decided to check it out. The man opened the slot and out came pythons and snakes.






Zane,collin and jordan bring out there sword’s and  Jordan grabbed a gun and started shooting them. Zane and collin were slicing head’s and body’s but there were too many so Zane,Collin and Jordan grabbed a parachute and jumped off and Jordan landed in a pool Collin landed on a trampoline and Zane I landed on a roof we all ran and the people on that plane did not survive.




That man was not found but that plane wasn’t either so this always lead up to a problem and  this man could strike again


Sorry it is not edited

Not Edited Verison

Once upon a time there was a Plane at the airport. And they were going to leave at 12.00 at that time it was 11.50 so they had 10 minutes till take off so they all sat in there seat and waited till take off and a man put his bag at the top of a person and then walked out the plane took off the bag inside but not the man the plane was in the sky when the under the bag heard the hiss and decided to check it out. The man opened the slot and out came pythons and snakes.






Zane,collin and jordan bring out there sword’s and  Jordan grabbed a gun and started shooting them. Zane and collin were slicing head’s and body’s but there were too many so Zane,Collin and Jordan grabbed a parachute and jumped off and Jordan landed in a pool Collin landed on a trampoline and Zane I landed on a roof we all ran and the people on that plane did not survive.




That man was not found but that plane wasn’t either so this always lead up to a problem and  this man could strike again

Friday, 25 October 2013

Edited Version


Every picture tells a story.



Once upon a time there was a man named max who lived on a farm and cut’s out the dead weed’s with his machete on his farm. He was walking and then his back hurt and he realized he was getting too old for this job.



He was looking for other people when he hurt his back again and needed help so he walked in a shop for help and the man helped him to the hospital and he knew he was the one. Max asked him do you mind running a farm and the man said sure Max smiled.



The next day the man named Samuel went to max's farm and helped him with cutting the weed’s and then it started raining so they went inside for a cuppa tea. They talked about who was going to own the farm after Max Samuel said I will take care of your farm max gave Samuel his machete.




The next day Samuel went back to the farm and the hospital was there and Samuel walked inside and saw a letter for him saying it is your farm now from Max so Samuel started to cut the weed’s
and do his job.The END



Farming Glossary


Create a glossary of words and explanations that would help a reader understand unknown and difficult words that relate to farming.

  • You will need to search for the meaning of these  words
  • try to find a picture to match.


Word
Meaning
Image
udder
Part of the cows body. The teats under the cows back legs. Where the milk is stored.
*
Pat
It is the cow’s dung.
*
paddock
A small field or enclosure where horses are kept or exercised
*
drench
Gets soaked in the rain.
*
vat
A large tank or tub used to hold liquid
*
waggle
Move or cause to move with short quick movements from side to side or up and down

hooves
Cows shoes.

squelching


clattering
Hooves stomping on the metal.
*
thudding



Thursday, 24 October 2013

Max And His Farm


Once upon a time there was a man named max who lived on a farm and he was taking out the dead weed’s.
He was walking and then his back hurt and he realised he was getting too old for this job.



He was looking for other people when he hurt his back again and needed help so he walked in a shop for help and the man helped him to the hospital and he knew he was the one. Max asked him do you mind running a farm and the man said sure Max smiled.


The next day the man named Samuel went to max's farm and helped him with cutting the weed’s and then it started raining so they went inside for a cuppa tea.




Monday, 14 October 2013

Farming


  • Why are farmers so important.
  • What would the world be like  without farmer's
  • When did people invent farmers
  • Who is the man or woman who came up with the idea of a farm.
  • Which is the most famous farm in the world.




Thursday, 26 September 2013

Minecraft Movie 1

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Zane Theseus And The Minotaur 1 from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.



We have been working on minecraft.
Enjoy my movie you cant really hear me though.

I really enjoy playing minecraft.

Friday, 6 September 2013

Weekends With My Cousins


Pretty much every weekend I go to my aunt's  who lives in mt albert, that was my old house.
One time I went there and me and my cousin played call of duty black ops 2 for nine hours.I do enjoy playing xbox 360 kinect. This weekend  I walked from richardson road to st lukes with my uncle we were grabbing a ball and a feed and my sister was coming back from waitangi with the school. My cousin Tahupotiki is a two year old and a his brother is a eight year old. I would enjoy having a baby brother. He is cute !!!!!!!!!









I hope i'm going to my cousins and I hope I go this week.