Monday, 4 November 2013

Term 4 Test

One day out in the country these boy’s named Joe,Franklin and Michael were people that like running into other peoples properties.

So one of the days they were playing around somebody’s farm they run past there all the time. But this time when they were running past it they heard something and then they stopped and looked at the farm and no one was there.

Joe walked closer and heard it again but it said ‘Joe’ and he ran back to the others and said it’s haunted with like a ghost or someones playing with us Michael said ‘there is no such thing as a ghost.’

So michael walked to the farm and he said ‘hello’ and the voice whispered ‘Michael’ and Michael said show your self and then a huge shadow went on the wall and michael shouted don't show yourself and he ran back to the other’s Michaels like its a ghost.

And Franklin walked up to the farm and said ‘show your self’ and the shadow came up on the wall again. Franklin wasn't as scared as the others because he was the one who set it up and the ghost was Franklins uncle and Joe and Michael were really angry at Franklin. But when they were leaving they heard it again and Franklin said Um guys you might want to turn around they were like not falling for and then they turned around to see were Michael was and he was running behind them and they saw someting they all ended up running home but now they think it is haunted but it was the farmer who had a white sheet over his tractor.

Every time That they ennoie Franklin hell bring up how they thought there was a ghost.   

The End I think

1 comment:

  1. Hey Zane!!
    My Name is Claire Williams. I am in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. We are each assigned a student to comment to his or her blogs each week. This week I got assigned to you!!

    I really enjoyed your story about the ghost!! It was very exciting. I have always been spooked by things like that. I hope that you continue with the story because it was very good! I love halloween, it is my favorite time of the year! :)

    Keep up the good work!!

    Claire Williams


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