WilI.I.Am visits Pt England School from SchoolTV on Vimeo.
At school I met Will i am,and I couldn't believe it,and I can't believe that he gave 100,000 to the manaiakalani cluster of schools.I was boom boom pow. I am a huge fan of
Will i am l I love him I've got all his songs my
best is reach for the stars.
Hi Zane, I love will.i.am too! I think you are all lucky to have had him come to your school, and I think he was lucky to get to see all the wonderful children and teachers at Pt England!
ReplyDeleteYour writing is getting better. I like the way you have used different size fonts for emphasis (to make a statement stand out).
Hi zane I like what you wrote about WILL.I.AM it was so cool I like the video and the picture is was cool as well as your writing Keep up the good work :)
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ReplyDeleteI like your paragraph your have posted maybe you should read it out loud for a little then give it to a buddy but anyway keep it up :)