My Retell Of Little Red Riding Hood

Once upon a time there was a little girl called little red riding hood she was going to go to her grandma because she was sick.

A kiss from her mother and saying don’t stop in the wood’s so off little red went in the wood she skipping along until she found some beautiful strawberries,big and juicy she was skipping  along the path finding big strawberries when she finished she ran back to her basket and ran off again.

This time she ended up chasing a butterfly but as she was chasing the butterfly she got further away from the path when the butterfly flew away little red riding hood heard a low gruff voice talking to her, she turned around and saw yellow big beady eyes and knew that was the deadly wolf,(”now wait there don’t you think the wolf is going to eat her just listen”)the wolf said,where are you going little red said,to my grandmas the wolf asked is she alone yes shes at the end of the path ok by maybe we will see eachother again yes by.

When she found her way back to the path she got her basket and ran off the fox had reached grandmas house the fox knocked on the door and said, grandma trying to hide his gruff voice grandma said, come in the ran  past the room and swallowed her up.

Finally little red riding hood got to grandma's house she knocked on the door saying grandma it’s me. The wolf quickly got dressed into her dress and sat on her bed saying come in dear. Little red riding hood said,what big ears you have better hear you my darling

what big hands  you have the better to hug you my dear

What big teeth you have the better to eat you said the wolf so the wolf gobbled her up and then he was tired and full so he had a little nap.

The hunter was on the search for the wolf when he came to grandma's cottage he was going to ask for a drink but when he past the window he saw the wolf sleeping right there and  he loaded his shotgun and bang shot in the head he went in and cut the wolf's stomach and found granny and little red just then little red’s mum came very worried and she said always stick to the path and walk fast.

The moral of the story is don't talk to stranger's and listen to you'r parent's.

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My Retell Of The Hare And The Tortoise.

Once upon a time on a lovely farm there was a hare and a tortoise.The hare is fast and selfish on the other hand the tortoise is polite and slow and what you will learn from this story is that slow and steady always wins the race.

On the farm the hare was being very rude to the turtle (tortoise) but the turtle probably wasn’t listening that’s when a fox popped out of the hedge row and he said the turtle’s hibernates hiber what's.The turtle sleeps for a whole winter what a whole winter he must be the laziest animal alive it would be hard to know if he is even dead. The turtle can live up to 100 years old,the fox made a deal with the hare and the turtle to have a race if the they won the badger and the rat and the hare would have to work for the fox and the turtle for a whole month.

It was the moment for the race they were both lined up at the line ready to race Ready Steady GO as he said the hare was just standing there waiting for the turtle to move off the line but he got bored and sprinted off. While he was running he was saying this is still to himself it is a long way to go just then he felt less springy and was tired,finally he got to the mountain,well six fields is a lot and hard to do, up on the mountain the hare could see  the turtle only past the 1st field. The hare was tired and decided to have a little nap but during his nap the turtle sneaked past him and was gone in the distance when the hare woke up the sun was going down and it was dark. On the way back he thought that the turtle had given up and went home, as he was getting closer he saw the rat and the badger, and said what’s my prize your prize is that we are working for the fox for a month.

The moral of the story is,the hare think’s he’s the best but then he had been beaten by a 100 year old slow coach haha.

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Zane's Movie About Antarctica

Here is my movie about Antarctica.

July People Rock

Birthdays now today My sisters turning eleven her name is kaycee here is her blog http://peskayceeh.blogspot.co.nz/  on Thursday my cousin tahu turned 2  

                         

My First Try In Rugby Leauge

Every Saturday mount wellington warriors would have a league game it was my lucky day I had been playing league for a while now but then in the last two minutes on the fifth tackle they were passing it all over the place and then I had just been set up by Louis puru and on the last second I had scored.On that night we had a prize giving and I had just got runner up in the end we had just lost 6-4 but we were all very happy because for the last two years we have be losing hard to them but here is all my friends blog's http://peslouisp.blogspot.co.nz/ , http://pestaimanat.blogspot.co.nz/ .Go WARRIORS

My Book

Title:Crocodile Attack

Author:Justin D’ath

Characters (Sam fox,Nissa, Brave and confused,scared and young, strengths, weaknesses):

Setting (In a shop and outside. outside in horrible weather,in side nice and warm.

What was the problem? A robber has stolen money and a child.

What was the solution?Sam fox saving his cousin.

Was there a plot twist? no

My favourite part of the book was? fighting for life against the crocodile’s.

If I could change the ending it would end like this?yes

Would I read this book again?Yes

Illustrate your favourite scene in the story. (Tux Paint)

Visit To Kelly Tarlton's

I have just been to Kelly tarlton's here is some photo's of us and the sea animal's.

 This is me and my friend. Here is his blog http://pesseant.blogspot.co.nz/

 We learnt about the penguin's

our class went to the park for a little play.

We really enjoyed seeing the stingray's,shark's and we even got to feel the starfish and saw the people with the sharks.Just then my (sean) friend couldn't spell area haha :)  . While we were there we versed each other in a race we had to put our hand's in freezing cold water.