Your Challenge: To explain how a morale from a fable applies to your life
You will need to think about:
- What fable you will choose and why
- How many and what characters will be in your story
- Your use of speech and the correct punctuation
- A Problem and solution
- Your attention to detail
Plan:
Paragraph 1: Retell and summarise an Aesop Fable of your choice
Paragraph 2: Explain the morale of the fable.
Paragraph 3: How does the morale apply to your life? What have you learnt?
Title: Goldilocks and the three bears
Start Writing Here
Paragraph 1
Once upon a time in the woods there were three bears that lived in an old cottage Farter bear mummy bear and baby bear.
The bear family went out for a walk and this little girl ran away from her mother her name was Goldilocks. She was running when she came past the cottage and he decided to go in.
When she got in she saw no one was there but she saw bowls of porridge and she hopped on the biggest seat and tried the porridge it was too hot and the chair was very big she went to the other chair it was a little bit smaller but the porridge was still the same so she went to the last chair and tried it and it was perfect she tried the porridge that was perfect as well she finished it all up when she finished it she felt tired.
She looked around to see anything but she saw stairs and decided to walk up She saw three beds and she didn't know which one to sleep on she tried all of them but the first two were too big and uncomfortable but the last was purrrrfect she went straight to sleep.
The bears came home very hungry looking for there porridge the papa bear said “someone has eaten all my porridge” mama bear said “someone has eaten mine” And baby bear said “someone has eaten all of mine” they heard loud snoring from the bedroom when they saw someone was in baby bear's bed they woke her up and scared her away they never saw goldilocks again.
Paragraph 2
The moral of the story is mind your own business and don’t use other peoples stuff without asking.
Paragraph 3
Don't use other peoples stuff without asking.And don't go into other peoples houses.
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